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Dear Cake,

I miss you Cake. It was only a few days ago I saw you at your most delicious. I was tempted- but I held back-in fear you'd notice the ice cream I had earlier that day. It was a mistake, I should have taken you then, but now it's too late. I was happy today Cake. Thinking I'd come home and have you will a tall glass of Milk, you and Milk got along so well. You sat as you usually did, on the table, beaming with chocolaty deliciousness, but as I came closer I realized some thing was wrong.
Cake….. you'd come down with a terrible infection, and you were ultimately pronounced dead. Why didn't I notice sooner? Had it been there all along with out my notice? I cried. I had to call my mother and tell her I was taking you away-to where all infected cakes go. I somberly had to drink Milk with out you. Though Milk lifted my spirits it was never as great as it was with you. I should have finished you sooner Cake then none of this would have happened. I hope for your safe trip into the Sky of Cakes.

Eternally lost with out you,
Blyu

P.S. If you reincarnate come back as a pound cake please.
I came home to find my cake all molded today. 8C as i threw it away i found myself saying my sad goodbyes. *sobs* thus- i had to write a letter.








no idea what the category is for this. its a poem thats not a poem.
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becursed Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011  Student Writer
This is awesome
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altera15 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010
I laughed. I hope you got more cake
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Blyu-dono Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010  Student General Artist
WHY DO YOU LAUGH AT MY PAIN? no jk and thanks i did lol
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ScaredAmbitious Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010
This was hilarious. I've had this happen to me too, it's terrible...

Only thing, this isn't really a poem. It's completely prose, through and through. Yeah, it's fiction, but that doesn't make it poetry. Just saying.

When you introduced Milk too, that was just so awesome. Chocolate cake just isn't the same without milk. This was fun to read. (:
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Blyu-dono Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010  Student General Artist
yes i know its not a poem...... idk what category to put it as so i just made it a poem. this is far from poetry.
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ScaredAmbitious Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010
either "Literature > Prose > Non-Fiction > Letters"
or
"Literature > Prose > Fiction > Humor > Flash Fiction & Vignettes"
;p
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Blyu-dono Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Student General Artist
this works i suppose. thanks
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ScaredAmbitious Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
no problem. =p
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myNaenia Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
R.I.P cake....very emotional letter :) good work
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StarredNight Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010
I'm quite amused with this letter. XD
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